Hmm... the right, the right side really, could use a little adjustment to make it look a bit more natural, but other than that... Ah! I really love the way you did his hair, and I like that you used a slightly darker color-scheme... bright-fluffy-sunshine never really was his thing, eh? Good job with this--thanks for sharing it with us!
Yeah, wasn't sure if you could or if it would be worthwhile... It depends on how the artists makes the art basically (which I typically have no information on ha ha). Just figured I'd point it out, if nothing else other than for future food-for-thought.